I have been waiting for this rewrite to happen. Rewrites are how good writing is done. If this is going to become a good script more passes over it will be needed - now that you have the major thread written - an update to the timeline is appropriate, filling in or “juggling” key scenes, enriching character development a little. ( I hope all your characters “make it” to final revision but … if one needs to be changed - nows the time”. )
Getting the vision in your mind onto the page - while praying for inspiration - will be enough.
I’m no expert but that’s my opinion … I’m looking forward to reading the next revision. Maybe weekly episodes can have more Content this pass. Enough for 3-5 “scenes” per episode?
I have been waiting for this rewrite to happen. Rewrites are how good writing is done. If this is going to become a good script more passes over it will be needed - now that you have the major thread written - an update to the timeline is appropriate, filling in or “juggling” key scenes, enriching character development a little. ( I hope all your characters “make it” to final revision but … if one needs to be changed - nows the time”. )
Getting the vision in your mind onto the page - while praying for inspiration - will be enough.
I’m no expert but that’s my opinion … I’m looking forward to reading the next revision. Maybe weekly episodes can have more Content this pass. Enough for 3-5 “scenes” per episode?
Thank you Barry. This was kinda scary...but needed.